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Mike Kelloway

105 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I listened carefully to my Liberal colleague’s speech. He is telling us that the Liberals want to defend culture. From the beginning, the Liberals’ argument about the Conservative motion has been that they cannot intervene in the CRTC’s decisions, since it is an independent body. The logical question is this: If they cannot intervene, that is one thing, but if they had the power to intervene, what would they do? Would they ask the CRTC to reverse that decision or not? That is the important question. Their answer will tell me whether or not they are protectors of culture.”
Statement grade
F
39 / 100, held down by Signal
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Aside 24%Positioning 67%Promise 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 25 wordsI am not sure I would put all that power into this one Cape Bretoner, because all the production would happen on Cape Breton Island.Aside Positioning · 70 wordsI will say that the main focus of this government is not just on protecting this sector and those jobs and movies that take place in Quebec, Manitoba or Cape Breton, but enhancing them. Where we are focused is how we build equity and fairness into the system to ensure that these companies, the actors and all of those skilled people I talked about recently are given a leg up.Positioning Promise · 10 wordsThat is what we are going to be focused on.Partly on pointVague promise

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