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Mike Kelloway

101 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jim Bélanger (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, as I mentioned before, the filming industry in my area, in Sudbury, managed to come about and grow because of tax credits, incentives and so on. I listened to the member, and I would like to ask him whether he is for or against this tax.”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 57%Promise 17%Aside 10%Positioning 16%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 36 wordsI think the fundamental, foundational piece here is what I just mentioned about equity and fairness. Where we need to focus is how we reinvest in our own people, our own talent and our own ability. Promise · 10 wordsI want to see more movies and shows in Sudbury, Partly on pointAside · 10 wordswhere I have not been, but I hope to go.Aside Promise · 7 wordsI want to see more of that. Reasoning · 22 wordsWhat we need to do is continuously focus on this: where the equity is not there, to make sure it is there. Positioning · 16 wordsThat is what a sound government does, and that is what a responsible government will do.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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