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Kristina Tesser Derksen

132 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Louis Villeneuve (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank my colleague for her speech. As a francophone, I would like to know how Bill C-11 will help protect and promote the work and artistic creations of francophone artists.”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 5%Claims 23%Anecdote 40%Aside 3%Reasoning 29%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsI thank my colleague for his question.Thanks Claims · 30 wordsCertainly, a big feature of what the CRTC is trying to do is highlight, encourage and elevate the voices of Canadians, including indigenous, regional and certainly francophone artists as well.1 Anecdote · 44 wordsI will just mention that I am learning French, 3as is probably evident from my speech, and as I was raising my children at home, often I would be able to turn on Canadian television and they could watch French cartoons, such as Caillou.2AnecdotePartly on point Aside · 4 wordsDoes everyone remember Caillou?Aside Anecdote · 9 wordsI actually started learning French that way as well.Anecdote Reasoning · 38 wordsI think it is very important that we continue to elevate the voices of our francophone artists. They are a true, central part of our Canadian identity. It is important that they be protected and allowed to thrive.

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