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Abdelhaq Sari

108 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jonathan Rowe (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if I understand correctly, these rules would even apply to YouTube, a website that provides one of the easiest avenues for Canadian artists to put their skills, talents and content on display. It is basically a website on which common folks can post their content. Where would the bill start, and where would it end? Where would the Liberals draw the lines? Are we going to start taxing all websites that have videos on them? This is my question: Where would the porn streaming sites fall under the bill? Would adult films be left out, unregulated and untaxed, while YouTube is regulated and taxed?”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Signal
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Aside 12%The ask 8%Reasoning 31%Procedure 15%Positioning 34%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 13 wordsI, too, was having a hard time speaking because of all the noise.Aside The ask · 9 wordsI would ask my colleague to repeat his question, Reasoning · 11 wordsbecause I could not really hear him, even with the interpretation.Partly on point Procedure · 16 wordsThat said, if I understood correctly, he was asking whether the tax will be broadly applied.Procedure Positioning · 29 wordsI am simply saying that what matters to us is the objective itself, that of protecting our industry, protecting out jobs and protecting our culture. That is the goal.Positioning Reasoning · 22 wordsThe most important thing is not knowing who will have to pay and who will not, but ensuring a degree of fairness. Positioning · 8 wordsObviously, that is what we are aiming for.PositioningPartly on point

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