Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Greeting 23%Claims 60%Thanks 18%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 42 wordsin 1876, visionary men and women planted a flag in the heart of Charlevoix to lay the groundwork for a project that would span generations and inspire respect.1Well, today, I would like to tell them that they did, in fact, succeed.GreetingClaims · 111 wordsThe Murray Bay Golf Club is celebrating its 150th anniversary.2It is still standing, still alive and proud to be in Charlevoix.It is the oldest golf club to still operate in the same location in North America.3It is much more than just a golf course.It is a symbol of our history, our community and sports tourism, and it is a great source of pride for Charlevoix and for Canada as a whole.The Murray Bay Golf Club has welcomed American presidents such as William Howard Taft, living legends such as Mario Lemieux and, above all, people from Charlevoix who, generation after generation, come to enjoy this beautiful sport.45Thanks · 33 wordsI commend the president, Claude Turcotte, the executive director, Marc Villeneuve, and all the volunteers who carry the torch year after year.I wish the Murray Bay Golf Club a happy 150th anniversary.Thanks