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Shannon Miedema

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 146 words85 years ago this month, on a rainy day in Saint John, New Brunswick, a bottle of champagne was broken over the bow of a new ship.1 This ship would become the HMCS Sackville and would go on to have a long and arduous career as a corvette in the Royal Canadian Navy.2 Most notably, this ship became the single surviving corvette of the Battle of the Atlantic, in which 294 small ships were the workhorses of the North Atlantic, dominating the longest battle of the Second World War.345 As the sole survivor, she was saved from the scrapyard and restored to her wartime configuration; she is now Canada’s naval memorial, spending her summers in the Halifax harbour, open to residents and tourists who would like to learn more about our navy’s history.6 Earlier this month, HMCS Sackville was officially recomissioned into the Royal Canadian Navy.7 Thanks · 27 wordsPlease join me in acknowledging this important symbol of Canada’s naval history, a sign of our commitment to stand in defence of our ideals and our country.Thanks

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