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Tim Hodgson

59 words · 3 sentences · 3 clauses

Replying to Mark Strahl (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister is off to New York for what even the CBC calls a straight-up networking trip. Perhaps he will meet with his friends at Brookfield Asset Management there. Like so many other investors, they fled Bay Street for Wall Street, with Main Street in Canada paying the price. Over the last Liberal decade, more than $1 trillion in investment has left Canada. That means lost jobs and lost wages for Canadian workers. The Prime Minister himself holds 91% of his personal investments in the United States. Is he in New York for Canadians, or is he just there to check up on his own portfolio?”
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Claims 88%Positioning 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 52 wordsif they did not spend so much time working on their clips, they might see people like the CEO of Shell, who just invested $20 billion in this country.1 They might see Chief Clayton of the Nisga’a Nation, who yesterday said she is looking forward to “manag[ing] prosperity” instead of “managing poverty”.2 Positioning · 7 wordsThat is how we are building Canada.Positioning

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