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Tim Hodgson

64 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Mark Strahl (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, speaking of $20 billion, that is how much money has left Canada in the last four quarters under this Prime Minister. After more than a decade of Liberal taxes, red tape and uncertainty, investors, including the Prime Minister, continue to take their money elsewhere. Despite Liberal re-announcements, major projects remain trapped in years of delays while Canadian workers lose those jobs. When will the Prime Minister take real action to cut red tape and repeal these anti-development laws that are continuing to bring about an investment exodus?”
Statement grade
C
61 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 9%Claims 61%Positioning 30%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordswe could go on and on.Procedure Claims · 39 wordsWhy does the member not come to Dease Lake, where we are investing billions in a new mine?1 Why does he not go to Nunavut and see where we have invested $4 billion in a new mine in Nunavut?2Partly on point Positioning · 19 wordsThey are so busy working on their clips, they are not actually seeing what is happening in this country.PositioningOff point

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