“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister is currently in New York for what the CBC described as just a networking trip— Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister was in New York this morning on a trip described by the CBC as just a networking trip. Let us talk about investments. After 10 years of Liberal governance, Canada is considered to be the most restrictive country in the G7 for foreign investment. According to RBC, $1 trillion in investment has been lost over the past 10 years. The example comes from the top, as 91% of the Prime Minister’s own assets are outside Canada. Does the Prime Minister know something that these people have yet to grasp?”
Statement grade
A
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Average 94 / 100
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Claims 82%Procedure 6%Positioning 12%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 12 wordsCanada is currently the top destination for foreign investment in the G7.1Procedure · 5 wordsThat is my first point.ProcedureClaims · 62 wordsMy second point, proving that we are currently a prime destination for business, is that 3,000 jobs were announced yesterday.2Saab, a Swedish company, decided to partner with Bombardier, a Canadian company of which we are very proud, to enter the military aerospace industry by building a new surveillance aircraft for us as well as for several other countries around the world.3Positioning · 11 wordsThat is how we are going to build a strong country.Positioning