“Mr. Speaker, while millions of Canadians struggle to put food on their table, the Liberal Prime Minister’s luxury inflight catering costs soared to $195,000 for three trips, at a time when one in three employed Canadians is using debt to pay for their food. In my home province of Saskatchewan, people are talking about whether or not it is okay to steal groceries from grocery stores. How out of touch does the Prime Minister have to be to cater luxury meals for himself and his buddies while Canadians are struggling to put food on the table?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 70. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 86%Procedure 4%Positioning 10%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 69 wordsour international efforts are about bringing results home for workers here in Canada.I will talk about our trip to China in January and the $7 billion dollars of agriculture access to China for our farmers across the country.1That is more access for our canola growers, our beef farmers and our seafood sector.Collectively that is over 500,000 jobs being supported for workers and farmers across the country.2Off pointProcedure · 4 wordsThat is not all.ProcedureClaims · 23 wordsRecently we met with Malaysia’s AirAsia CEO.3That brought a deal worth $15 billion, 4which will result in 30,000 jobs across the country.5Positioning · 11 wordsAll our international efforts are about bringing jobs home for Canadians.PositioningOff point