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Joël Lightbound

96 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Jason Groleau (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister cost Canadians $195,000 in gourmet meals on three flights alone. Life is good for the Prime Minister. It makes no difference to him since he is not the one paying. Meanwhile, 34% of Canadian workers have to go into debt just to eat properly. Will the Prime Minister stop adding luxury meals, paid for by Canadians, to his inflationary deficits?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 9%Claims 76%Positioning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsover the past year, we have seen something unprecedented: ProcedureClaims · 73 wordsCanada has signed 20 trade and security agreements around the world and 56 critical mineral agreements.1 We are breaking records when it comes to foreign direct investment in Canada.2 A recent example of this is the order for 150 Airbus aircraft to be built in Quebec.3 This is the result of the work the Prime Minister and ministers are doing abroad. They are bringing good jobs and good investment back here to Canada. Positioning · 14 wordsI think this is exactly what the people of Beauce and Quebec are expecting.PositioningOff point

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