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Mélanie Joly

80 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Terry Sheehan (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the American tariffs on steel are completely unjustified and illegal. The House knows that. They are affecting my community of Sault Ste. Marie and the surrounding area. They are making people anxious and creating very difficult decisions for people to make right now. Recently, the Minister of Industry was in the Soo to make a very important announcement on how she would have the backs of workers and of the industry. Can she update us on her plan to support the workers and the industry and to make a major milestone investment at Tenaris?”
Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 20%Claims 74%Procedure 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordsI would like to thank our fantastic MP for Sault Ste. Marie—Algoma for his hard work.Thanks Claims · 26 wordsI know that the community and the town have been going through really tough times because of the unjustified and illegal American tariffs against our steelworkers, Partly on pointProcedure · 5 wordsbut there is good news.Procedure Claims · 33 wordsNotwithstanding U.S. protectionism, our plan is working, because in Sault Ste. Marie last Friday, we were able to announce 200 new jobs, a $76-million investment by the federal government, 12and Tenaris’ own investment.

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