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Mike Kelloway

82 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Greg McLean (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, before the member goes too far defending this boondoggle, let me refer him to the publicly disclosed documents. A year ago, the spaceport’s auditor indicated it was near bankruptcy. Nothing indicated the potential windfall of a $20-million lease with the government. Overpaying is one thing. Gifting $20 million to one’s friends is an egregious abuse of taxpayer trust: Liberal insiders selling their shares for millions of dollars after the minister’s giveaway. The securities commission will have to investigate. Will the minister tell us who he thinks is going to be left standing when the music stops?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 65%Aside 18%Claims 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordsanother running theme in the House: conspiracy.Positioning Aside · 15 wordsThe Conservative Party of Canada should now be the CPC, the Conspiracy Party of Canada.Aside Positioning · 30 wordsIt loves a great conspiracy. It could not be that Nova Scotia is excelling in a new industry. It could not be that. It could not be the great workers.Positioning Claims · 14 wordsIt could not be the Premier of Nova Scotia, a Conservative, who supports it. Positioning · 16 wordsEverywhere we look, there is a conspiracy when it comes to the Conservative Party of Canada.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty

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