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Anita Anand

69 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Michael Chong (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if Beijing’s foreign interference and transnational repression are the greatest threat to the security of Canada and if the government is confident about the MOU between itself and Beijing’s Ministry of Public Security, the government should simply release the MOU and let Canadians decide for themselves. Will the minister raise the issue of transnational repression and foreign interference when she meets with Foreign Minister Wang Yi this week?”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Positioning 28%Claims 32%Promise 41%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 19 wordsour government will always stand up for Canadians, protect our national interests and engage from a position of strength.PositioningVague promise Claims · 22 wordsWe welcome the upcoming visit of Chinese foreign minister Wang Yi, the first such bilateral visit to Canada in nearly a decade.1 Promise · 28 wordsWe will also work with China where it advances Canada’s national interests, including on trade, economic stability and global security, Vague promisewhile defending Canada’s sovereignty, security and values unequivocally.Partly on pointVague promise

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