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Doly Begum

107 words · 4 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Alexis Deschênes (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to welcome my colleague and congratulate her on her first speech in the House. I would like to hear her comments on the Liberal government’s backtracking on the digital services tax. What are her thoughts on this?”
Statement grade
D–
Average 44 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 22%Procedure 17%Claims 10%Anecdote 14%Aside 16%Promise 21%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsI think our government is taking all the steps necessary, especially at the time right now, to address the challenges that people are facing.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise Procedure · 18 wordsIf I had had more time, I would have talked about more measures that our government is taking.Procedure Claims · 11 wordsRight now we are facing a very difficult time with tariffs, Anecdote · 15 wordsand just this morning, I was at the industry committee, where we talked about AI.1Anecdote Aside · 17 wordsI know my hon. colleague has sat with me at some of the committee hearings as well, AsidePromise · 22 wordsso we will work together to make sure that we have policies that help everyone, Vague promiseand I look forward to doing that.Off point

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