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Sandra Cobena

117 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Fred Davies (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank my colleague for that thoughtful presentation. She knows full well that when governments pick winners and losers, capital flees. Capital flows to where certainty exists. In this regime, under this proposal, there is no certainty. The CRTC is oblivious to economics, trade or capital flow. Can the hon. member tell me how she thinks the decision can negatively impact investment in Canadian production and Canadian culture?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 4%Claims 81%Reasoning 13%Procedure 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 5 wordsI have one clear example.Greeting Claims · 40 wordsI talk a lot to entrepreneurs on the ground, one of whom in particular said they had been trying to open up markets in Europe. They had competed with respect to quality and price, yet they still lost the contract. Reasoning · 15 wordsA good company and smart entrepreneur would seek feedback once they had lost a contract, Claims · 34 wordsso they contacted the buyer to ask why they lost out. In this case, they lost out to an American company. The buyer said that they were identical with respect to quality and price, Partly on pointProcedure · 2 wordsbut, unfortunately, ProcedureClaims · 21 wordsas Canada is known to be a country that is very difficult to do business with, they decided to buy American.1Partly on point

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