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Lena Metlege Diab

60 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, I am glad the minister talked about another justice bill. Bill C-16 renders all mandatory minimum penalties meaningless, which means that this problem of giving sweetheart sentences to non-citizens convicted of serious crimes would only get worse. Will the minister go to the justice minister and recommend an amendment to Bill C-16 that would not juice this problem of judges giving lenient sentences to non-citizens convicted of serious crimes, like the strangler my colleague just talked about, to ensure that they do not have the privilege of staying in our country and are deported like they should be?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 30%Positioning 20%Claims 50%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 18 wordsI really appreciate this discussion here tonight because it is really important. It affects a lot of people.Procedure Positioning · 5 wordsWe take that very seriously.PositioningVague promise Claims · 30 wordsCriminals, whether Canadians, visitors or whatever their status is in Canada, will be held responsible by the law. The courts do their best. If they are non-Canadians, the CBSA investigates.1 Positioning · 7 wordsOur priority is to always protect Canadians.PositioningPartly on point

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