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Lena Metlege Diab

59 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Melissa Lantsman (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, temporary foreign workers are up. Let the record show it. The minister cannot mislead the House by saying otherwise. However, let us talk about study permits for a second. The minister’s department can investigate 2,000 fraud cases a year. The Auditor General flagged that there are 153,000 cases. At that pace, it is going to take 76 years. That is probably longer than I am going to be here and probably longer than she is going to be here. Is that acceptable to her?”
Statement grade
D+
54 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 41%Procedure 17%Positioning 42%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Claims · 19 wordsin fact, the Auditor General found clear evidence of improvements in that there are fewer student visas being issued.1Partly on point Procedure · 10 wordsI have already talked about the arrivals of these students.Procedure Claims · 5 wordsIt is a significant decrease.Partly on point Positioning · 25 wordsPerhaps the member does not want any to come to the country. Perhaps she should be speaking to the universities, provinces, territories, municipalities and people—PositioningOff point

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