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Lena Metlege Diab

128 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Fred Davies (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, for 10 years, IRCC has spiralled from backlog to backlog while temporary migration numbers exploded beyond Canada’s capacity for housing, health care and infrastructure. Nearly two million visas and permits are now approaching expiry, exposing a system riddled with abuse by questionable colleges that turn immigration into a business model. One of the programs that got caught up in this chaos is the start-up visa program, which has not been talked about by anyone since the new government has taken office. There are now around 43,000 innovation founders waiting in the queue, having paid substantial fees to go through incubation and business building programs, but your website now says, Minister, that there is a 10-year wait for visas to be issued. These entrepreneurs are going elsewhere, where there is no chaos and where economic certainty exists. Is the minister okay with this?”
Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Procedure 16%Claims 48%Reasoning 37%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 14 wordsthat is a very interesting and good question. I have been transparent and clear.Procedure Claims · 61 wordsIn fact, I was at the Toronto Club and was asked exactly that question and questions along those lines. In fact the individuals who were there asking me were all business people and people who knew about this program.Partly on point They told me there was so much fraud in that particular program and that they understood why we had to pause it. Procedure · 6 wordsWe have been clear and transparent.Procedure Reasoning · 47 wordsWe paused the program because we, 1or the department before I got there, could not control the applications coming in.2Hidden agency Therefore, we needed to pause it and take a look at it to ensure we have a system that works for the top talent this country needs.Vague promise

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