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Lena Metlege Diab

65 words · 3 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Fred Davies (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, it is not that I want to correct the minister by her trying to correct what she had already said, that the program had been rife with corruption, but the IRCC’s own evaluations identified problematic applications, weak oversight and pay-to-incubate schemes involving designated organizations. Why did your government fail to act before the backlog exploded past 43,000 applications? Why did you subcontract a designated organization approval process to NACO? Does the minister know what NACO is?”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 86%Positioning 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Claims · 50 wordsagain, as I have said, that program was paused.1 The department is actively looking at what the best way is, Vague promisebecause part of my mission is to bring sustainability to our permanent resident numbers and our temporary resident numbers, to attract francophone immigration and to bring global talent to Canada. Positioning · 9 wordsThat is exactly the mission we are working on, PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 6 wordsand we are achieving clear results.Off point

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