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Lena Metlege Diab

62 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Fred Davies (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, let us talk about results. Right now, the minister’s website says the approval time for start-up visa program applications is in excess of 10 years. People can get approval in France in one to two months. In the United States, it is 15 days. In Germany, it is four to six months. In the U.K., it is two to four months. In Canada, it is 10 excruciatingly painful years. Is the minister okay with that?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 16%Claims 55%Positioning 29%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 10 wordslet me tell everyone about processing and our service standards: ProcedureClaims · 21 words80% of completed applications are processed within service standards.1 There is high demand for the available level space that we have. Positioning · 18 wordsWe have been transparent. We have been clear with all Canadians and all members of Parliament on that.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsOur staff has cross-training so they can work with the demand we have.Partly on point

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