“Mr. Chair, Conservatives gave the minister multiple opportunities to admit tonight that the Liberals have failed the victims of foreign criminals. Her answer was “Oh well”, and she demurred on the importance. I will give her one more chance. Will she commit tonight to amending the Immigration and Refugee Protection Act so foreign criminals no longer get sentencing discounts?”
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Mr. Chair, Anecdote · 18 wordsif I were not a lawyer who practised law for 22 years, I might fall into that trap.1AnecdoteClaims · 14 wordsThe point is, there is nothing to amend.2It is not in the act.3