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Lena Metlege Diab

36 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, the law requires that non-citizens convicted of a serious crime be deported, yet the minister refuses to close a loophole that keeps them here. A temporary foreign worker assaulted a woman then robbed her, yet he was given a lenient sentence to avoid deportation. Can the minister tell the victim why this person is still in Canada?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 100%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Claims · 36 wordsI will continue on the fact that we are strengthening our communities.Vague promise We are protecting our population.Vague promise We are managing immigration.Vague promise We are bringing in talented tradespeople, strengthening rural communities, attracting health workers, fast-tracking physicians and—Partly on point

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