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Michelle Rempel Garner

103 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 63%Procedure 6%Positioning 20%The question 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Claims · 30 wordsI brought in a law that would have amended the Criminal Code by one line, to say that judges cannot issue lenient sentences in order to help non-citizens avoid deportation.1 Procedure · 6 wordsI will ask the minister again.Procedure Claims · 14 wordsColleagues should keep in mind that I am asking her to speak to victims. Positioning · 21 wordsIt is drivel that she is putting forward. Members should think about that and think about what these victims are hearing.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsA non-citizen arranged to have sex with an underage girl and then received a lenient sentence in order to avoid deportation.2 The question · 11 wordsDoes the minister think this person deserves to stay in Canada?

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