Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 63%Thanks 15%Reasoning 17%Positioning 6%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 37 wordslast Sunday, I had the opportunity to attend the ceremonial parade of the 806 Sainte-Thérèse Air Cadet Squadron, 1which brought together more than 90 young cadets.2What a great organization that teaches leadership, civic responsibility and teamwork.Thanks · 24 wordsI would like to congratulate all the cadets for their participation and commitment, as well as Blainville’s own Raphaëlle Chicoine for an exceptional honour.ThanksClaims · 65 wordsAt just 17 years old, she received the Lord Strathcona Medal for her leadership and dedication, the highest honour awarded to a cadet.3She has been flying planes and actively participating in our community for more than two years.4Through her determination and passion, Raphaëlle is a true source of inspiration for her peers and a shining example of what our young people can accomplish.Logical leapReasoning · 28 wordsAttending this event served as a reminder that young people are not just the future, but also the present.It is crucial to recognize young people like Raphaëlle.Positioning · 9 wordsWith their active contributions, we are building Canada strong.Positioning