Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Rachel Bendayan

168 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

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Claims 32%Thanks 48%Anecdote 17%The ask 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 10 wordssummer has arrived in Outremont, Mile End and the Plateau. Thanks · 22 wordsI would like to say thanks to all our shopkeepers, restaurant owners, cafés and everyone who brings our shopping areas to life.Thanks Claims · 26 wordsBernard Avenue is once again a pedestrian zone this year.1 Children are playing in the street, parents are enjoying the patios and everyone gets ice cream. Thanks · 38 wordsLast week, I took part in a Mile End celebration, alongside thousands of people, thanks to the incredible work of the Laurier West BIA, the Mile End Business Association and, of course, Gabriel Dallaire and his entire team.2Thanks Anecdote · 29 wordsThis year, I was able to count on the invaluable help of my daughter Ellie to hand out lemonade and popcorn to residents. She rose to the challenge brilliantly.Anecdote Thanks · 20 wordsIn the Plateau, the Rue Saint-Denis BIA and Pauline Béchu helped make the Montreal Comic Arts Festival a resounding success.3Thanks Claims · 18 wordsOn Mont-Royal Avenue, which is once again pedestrian only, the trade fair is in full swing until Sunday.4 The ask · 5 wordsThis summer, support local businesses.

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