Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Thanks 57%Anecdote 18%Claims 25%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordsI rise to mark the remarkable legacy and contributions of Arbour Glen Day Nursery, a child care centre in our community of London, Ontario, that will soon mark its 60th anniversary.1ThanksAnecdote · 30 wordsI say it is remarkable because I speak from experience.Our daughter Ava took her first few steps there, formed her first friendships there and learned her first words there.AnecdoteClaims · 36 wordsWhat is true of Ava and our experience is true of so many other families and kids in London.This is a great place.It has been around for 60 years and for very good reason.Thanks · 66 wordsIt is because of the leadership, and it is because of the board, but it is especially because of the early childhood educators.I use those words very deliberately, as they are the teachers who help these kids day in and day out.With that, I wish the nursery another 60 years of incredible contributions and thank it for all the work that it has done.ThanksClaims · 7 wordsIt matters.It has made a difference.