“Mr. Speaker, first of all, I would like to thank my hon. colleague for his service. Two days ago, to much fanfare at CANSEC, the Prime Minister announced a deal to purchase military aircraft from Saab, which I believe is an affiliate company of Brookfield. Have they actually signed a deal, or is it another Liberal illusion?”
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Claims 53%Positioning 23%Procedure 24%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsindeed, there was much fanfare and much excitement from industry as this amazing deal was supposedly announced.Positioning · 4 wordsThis is more illusion, PositioningProcedure · 7 wordsas I alluded to throughout my speech.ProcedurePositioning · 9 wordsThe Prime Minister of Oz made this great announcement.MockeryProcedure · 15 wordsLet me hold back the curtain and show the reality, right from Saab’s press release.ProcedureClaims · 40 wordsOn its web page, Saab stated, “Canada has announced that they will enter into detailed discussions and formal negotiations with Saab [to be potentially] the preferred supplier of Canada’s future....1Saab has not signed a contract nor received an order.”2Procedure · 4 wordsThat is the reality.ProcedurePositioning · 12 wordsAcross the way is the illusion, and Canadians are seeing through it.Positioning