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Kevin Lamoureux

124 words · 11 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Bruce Fanjoy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, building Canada strong for all creates an extraordinary opportunity in the trades. Can the hon. member please inform the House of the opportunities that exist for young people in the trades?”
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Average 87 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 4%Procedure 12%Claims 69%Positioning 15%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsI really welcome that question.Thanks Procedure · 15 wordsUnfortunately, because of time constraints, I was not able to bring that into my comments.Procedure Claims · 61 wordsWe have a fabulous program for the Red Seals. The Red Seal program is literally dozens of skilled trades that are recognized across our nation, 1and we have made a commitment to support Red Seal certificates.2Vague promise It is about $5,000 for people who actually complete the program.3 We are talking about anywhere from 80,000 to 100,000 new Red Seal skilled workers.4 Positioning · 19 wordsThat is tangible. It is real. That is what is going to help build Canada well into the future.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsIt is investing in young people. It is investing in the skills of the future that we need in order to continue that building.

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