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Mike Kelloway

156 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 25 wordsI rise to congratulate the Cape Breton artists who took home honours at the 38th East Coast Music Awards last week in Sydney, Cape Breton.1Thanks Claims · 117 wordsGoldie Boutilier, of Reserve Mines, had a historic week, winning album of the year, breakthrough artist of the year and rock/alternative release of the year.2 Morgan Toney, from We’koqma’q, won both the indigenous artist of the year and the fusion release of the year, 3and Elyse Aeryn of Glace Bay, my hometown, claimed release of the year.412 The Barra MacNeils received the Dr. Helen Creighton Lifetime Achievement Award.5 Emily Dingwall received the musician’s achievement award.6 Nik MacDonald received artist management of the year.7 Joseph Parris received the Bucky Adams Memorial Award.8 Donnie MacNeil received the technical excellence award.9 The Celtic Colours International Festival won event of the year.10 The late Laura Mercer received the Stompin’ Tom Award.11 Positioning · 14 wordsCape Breton was not just the host for the ECMAs. We are its heart.Positioning

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