Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Melissa Lantsman

Conservative on Shomrim Toronto 2026-06-01

179 words · 12 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade

A–

Average 87 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Procedure 8%Claims 56%Thanks 11%Reasoning 11%Positioning 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordstoday I rise to recognize an extraordinary demonstration of community strength right here in Canada.Procedure Claims · 54 wordsWhen a young girl went missing in north Toronto, Shomrim Toronto, a volunteer community safety and security organization, mobilized immediately.¹ Shomrim coordinated its members alongside local law enforcement, community organizations and thousands of residents who answered the call without hesitation. They were strangers who dropped everything to help. The young girl was found safe, ²Thanks · 10 wordsand we send our deepest thanks to everyone who helped.Thanks Claims · 37 wordsWhat unfolded over those first critical hours, days and weeks is a testament to their professionalism and compassion. They are ordinary people working around the clock for days and weeks. That is a testament to their professionalism. Reasoning · 20 wordsIt is not just a supplement to public safety, but an essential pillar of it, and we should recognize that. Thanks · 9 wordsShomrim Toronto deserves the full recognition of the House.Thanks Claims · 9 wordsThis year, it will receive a community heroes award.³ Positioning · 25 wordsThose who know Shomrim’s value understand it is as sacred as the life and universe it helped save this time and every time before it.Positioning

At a glance

Lost points for

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What the tags mean

Signal · 60

4 of 4 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “today I rise to recognize an extraordinary demonstration of community strength right here in Canada.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “and we send our deepest thanks to everyone who helped.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “Shomrim Toronto deserves the full recognition of the House.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “Those who know Shomrim’s value understand it is as sacred as the life and universe it helped save this time and every time before it.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · no score

Not applicable: nothing to answer. Excluded from the average.

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue.

Respect · 100

0 of 4 deductions are Respect

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Nothing lost points.

Clarity · 100

0 of 4 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Nothing lost points.

Claims · 3

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“When a young girl went missing in north Toronto, Shomrim Toronto, a volunteer community safety and security organization, mobilized immediately.”Shomrim Toronto, a volunteer community safety organization, mobilized after a young girl went missing in north Toronto.search
2“The young girl was found safe,”The young girl who went missing in north Toronto was found safe.search
3“This year, it will receive a community heroes award.”Shomrim Toronto will receive a community heroes award in 2026.search

Analysed on 2026-10-20