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Jessica Fancy

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsI rise today to recognize a remarkable achievement by a talented writer in my riding of South Shore—St. Margarets.Procedure Claims · 88 wordsDarcy Rhyno from Little Harbour has been honoured in the Canadian chapter of the Society of American Travel Writers awards, earning three distinctions for his outstanding storytelling.1 First, he received bronze for the best service story for his piece highlighting a geocaching project that brings African Canadian history to life in Shelburne County.2 He earned silver for the best Canadian story for his exploration of Anticosti Island.3 Finally, he won a bronze for the best international story for his travel feature on cycling around Lake Constance in Europe.4 Thanks · 41 wordsThese awards are a testament not only to Darcy’s talents, but to his ability to share meaningful stories. His work helps shine a light on history, culture and place, and it also reflects the creativity and excellence found in our region.Thanks

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