“Mr. Speaker, after 11 years of the incompetent Liberal government, there is nothing left to celebrate. The single mom who lost her job has nothing to celebrate. The 2.2 million Canadians going to a food bank have nothing to celebrate. In five straight quarters, business investment has declined. In three out of the last four quarters, the economy has shrunk. Twenty billion dollars of investment has fled to the U.S. because of the incompetent Prime Minister since he took power. Instead of trying to make America great again, why does he not tell us why Canada is the only G7 country in a recession today?”
Statement grade
D+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 65. The grade is held to 53, 30 above Relevance.
53 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 47%Promise 29%Positioning 25%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 19 wordsin the last election, Canadians had a choice.They elected a Prime Minister with world-class economic and business credentials.1Off pointPromise · 13 wordsWe are going to build the strongest, most resilient economy in the G7.Vague promiseClaims · 17 wordsAt home, we are investing.We are investing in infrastructure, defence and housing.We are cutting taxes.Promise · 9 wordsWe are going to build a strong, resilient economy.Partly on pointVague promisePositioning · 19 wordsOn that side of the House, it is nothing but empty parking lot press conferences, props, bluster and rhetoric.PositioningOff point