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Ryan Turnbull

82 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Kyle Seeback (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I can say this. No Conservative will ever apologize for getting up and fighting against this bad Liberal government. Let us talk about some numbers that the member says we are making up. According to Statistics Canada, 112,000 Canadians have lost their jobs this year. According to Food Banks Canada, 25% of Canadians are now food insecure. These are not fake numbers. The member should know that. These are real people who are suffering as a result of the Liberal government. If it is all about external events, as the Liberals keep saying, why is Canada the only G7 country in a recession? How about a real answer?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 10%Claims 30%Positioning 52%Promise 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordslet me give the member a real answer.Procedure Claims · 11 wordsCanada’s economy is strong and becoming more resilient under this government. Positioning · 36 wordsWe will never apologize, on this side of the House, for being optimistic about the future we are building in this country, together with all Canadians, with generational investments in housing, infrastructure, defence, innovation and productivity.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 14 wordsWe are seeing the highest level of foreign direct investments in nearly two decades.1 Positioning · 7 wordsThat is good news. Canadians know it.PositioningPartly on pointUnearned certainty Promise · 6 wordsWe will continue building a stronger—Vague promise

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