“Mr. Speaker, Canada signed a police co-operation agreement with China behind closed doors. The RCMP reportedly revealed that Canada cannot publicly disclose details of the MOU without Beijing’s approval. The foreign affairs minister said she spoke frankly with the Chinese foreign affairs minister about human rights abuses, foreign interference and transnational repression activities last week. China has a history of weaponizing shared intelligence such as Operation Fox Hunt. Will the minister be frank with Canadians and tell us whether she asked China’s permission to release the MOU, yes or no?”
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordslet me be frank with this House and with Canadians: ProcedureClaims · 64 wordsCanada has entered into MOUs with China with respect to combatting crime in various forms since 2010 and, 1as has historically been the case with this agreement, the advice of Canada’s intelligence agencies is always followed.2Hidden agencyI had a productive exchange with China’s minister of foreign affairs regarding areas of mutual interest.3I raised issues relating to transnational repression, human rights and security domestically.4Positioning · 8 wordsI will always stand up for Canadian values.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise