Replying to John-Paul Danko (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, it is absolutely shocking and very disappointing to hear the member opposite disparage our government’s $10-a-day child care program. This is such an important program for families and for women to be involved in the workforce. Hearing Conservatives talk about private options being preferable just shows how out of touch they are. The American president caused a global war against Iran, which is at risk of causing a global recession with the highest increase in oil prices ever. Will the member opposite criticize the American administration on the record?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 62. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 7%Procedure 9%Positioning 27%Claims 56%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Aside · 10 wordsI believe this is the House of Commons in Canada.AsideProcedure · 13 wordsHowever, I want to go back to the member’s comments about day care.ProcedurePositioning · 12 wordsThe member should be ashamed of himself for his day care program, PositioningClaims · 7 wordsbecause it has created very few spots.Positioning · 12 wordsThe Liberals have actually misled Canadians, which they do all the time.PositioningClaims · 35 wordsWe brought forward solutions at committee, actually, to make the day care program better, 1where people could use a voucher and pay for private sector day care or government sector day care if it works.Positioning · 13 wordsWe believe in giving people choices and not forcing them into one thing.PositioningClaims · 35 wordsI would love for him to go to Hamilton and see how many people are actually looking for day care spaces and cannot get them because the Liberals’ program caused private ones to shut down.Off point