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Grant Jackson

257 words · 11 sentences · 15 clauses

Replying to Mario Beaulieu (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to know what my colleague thinks about the fact that the economic update overlooked President Trump’s tariff increase. This is a 25% tariff on all products containing aluminum and steel, and it affects 25% of exports from Quebec to the United States. This makes Quebec the location most affected by tariffs. The Bloc Québécois is proposing wage subsidy measures. Does my colleague acknowledge that? What solution does he propose?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 34%Claims 53%Aside 13%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordsthere is no question that Donald Trump’s tariffs on Canadian products are an absolute disaster.1PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 64 wordsUnfortunately, an equal disaster is the Liberal government’s failure to live up to its election commitment to negotiate a deal with his administration. The Prime Minister touted himself as the big economic expert who was going to fly in and get a win for Canada. Well, here we are, well over a year into his prime ministership, 2and there is no deal with America, 3Positioning · 31 wordsso my friends from Quebec, as well as those from every other province and from specific industries, are facing the brunt of that because of that failed promise from the Liberals.Positioning Claims · 72 wordsThe Conservatives do not believe in wage subsidies in particular. We would rather negotiate a deal in which we could continue to have tariff-free access to the American market.Vague promise Our leader has put forward a plan to boost Canadian natural resources, not just in the oil and gas sector but also in the critical minerals sector, 4and use that as leverage to negotiate with the Americans for tariff-free access to their market. Aside · 34 wordsThat is something we would love for the Liberals to pillage from us. Maybe the Minister responsible for Canada-U.S. Trade wants to take that when he is on his next junket down to Washington.Aside Positioning · 41 wordsWe would be glad for him to take it, glad for him to finally get some success on this file and glad to help our friends from Quebec and their industries that have been impacted by Donald Trump’s disastrous tariff policy.PositioningOff point

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