Replying to Blake Richards (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I would like to ask the member something that is absolutely related to this. We hear this talk about the investments that we have yet to see that the Liberals claim they are going to make in our Armed Forces. They claim that it is going to mean huge increases in recruitment for the Canadian Armed Forces, but we see the way they treat our veterans. We see the massive cuts that have been made. I know that the member represents many veterans in his area. I wonder whether he would like to comment on what he hears from veterans and whether they would recommend that people get involved in our Armed Forces, based on how our veterans are treated by the government.”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 71. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 12%Reasoning 28%Claims 53%The question 7%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordsI thank my colleague for his important work standing up for the veterans of this country.ThanksReasoning · 38 wordsNo higher purpose, as I see it, really exists in this Parliament and in this country than standing up for those who have put on a uniform and put themselves in harm’s way for the rest of us.Off pointAn hon. member: You closed down the office in Brandon.You know that, right?Grant Jackson: Claims · 46 wordsMadam Speaker, to the member for Winnipeg North, I love this question because, yes, the office in Brandon was temporarily closed and moved to Shilo.1The Liberals made hay of that when they were in opposition.They have since closed the Brandon office that they reopened.2The question · 10 wordsI wonder if the member for Winnipeg North knows that.Claims · 5 wordsIt closed last year, permanently.3Off pointAn hon. member: No. Grant Jackson: Claims · 20 wordsMadam Speaker, yes, they gave up the lease, 4and the entire staff has been moved to Canadian Forces Base Shilo.5Off point