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Jasraj Hallan

132 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Mark Gerretsen (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, it would be a lot easier to take the Conservatives at their word if they did not seem giddy about the fact that we are in the position we are in. On Friday, right after Statistics Canada had announced this news, the Leader of the Opposition ran out, almost excited, like he was happy that we were in this position. He started challenging reporters, when they were basically just asking him questions. A question that was asked by a reporter was whether he was overblowing this a little based on what the economists were saying. The Leader of the Opposition then asked what outlet they were with. Now the Conservatives are going to stand there and accuse us of employing the Donald Trump tactics. Members can look at what they are doing. Does the member not think that perhaps, just a little, the Conservatives are overplaying their hand with this, in the degree of excitement that they are showing for the circumstances that we are in right now?”
Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
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Positioning 30%Claims 70%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 32 wordslet me humble that out-of-touch, mega Liberal.Off point After 11 years of this incompetent Liberal government, no one is giddy anymore. No one is excited anymore. No one has anything to smile about.Positioning Claims · 92 wordsThe 2.2 million Canadians waiting in a food bank line are not giddy.1 The dad who just lost his job because of incompetent Liberal policies is not excited and is not giddy. The mom who has to put food back because she cannot afford it this week is not giddy. Conservatives are standing up for those Canadians because of bad Liberal policies that drove us into a recession, drove record numbers of people into the food bank and made more people food-insecure today than we have ever seen in this country before.23 Positioning · 8 wordsThat is what Conservatives are standing up for.Positioning

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