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Jeremy Patzer

136 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Buckley Belanger (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I want to ask one very specific question. What are the member’s qualifications that determine his world economic view? I would like it if he could perhaps provide me with a list of studies that he has undertaken or degrees he has achieved. It is important that we take advice from folks who have a lot of knowledge, as our Prime Minister does, on world trading trends. We have often heard, for the last several months, about the Conservatives’ plan. Can the member give me a copy of their plan today that they have been talking about for the last two months? I do not think they have a plan. It is a made-up plan with voodoo economics attached to it. Can he give me a copy of their economic plan today?”
Statement grade
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Average 74 / 100
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Claims 70%Positioning 22%Procedure 8%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 23 wordsthat is a bit of a ridiculous question coming from that member, who spent 26 years in a provincial government and destroyed Saskatchewan.1 Positioning · 7 wordsThat is his track record: destroyed it.PositioningOff point Procedure · 11 wordsAgain, he takes issue with what I said, but guess what.Procedure Claims · 21 wordsI was quoting the Prime Minister.2 If he takes issue with what I was saying, I was quoting the Prime Minister. Positioning · 15 wordsHe should talk to his boss if he does not like what I was saying, PositioningClaims · 51 wordsbecause that is who I got it from.Partly on point If he wants to know what our plan is, he should just go back and look at the blues.Vague promise We have it right on record. We debated it in this very House, 3and this member is saying he has never seen our plan. Positioning · 8 wordsHe needs to wake up and pay attention.Positioning

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