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Jeremy Patzer

125 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Warren Steinley (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the question we were just asked by the only Liberal in Saskatchewan was about the qualifications of a member of Parliament. Our qualifications are that we work hard, we get voted in by the people and we bring their voices to the House. My big problem with this member is that he represents northern Saskatchewan and has voted against every common-sense motion we have had. He voted to add taxes to streaming services. He voted to not scrap the industrial carbon tax. He voted to keep the gun confiscation plan in place. Everything his constituents sent him here to support, he has voted against. I would like some comments from my colleague on that. Do not forget the Snowbirds.”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
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Procedure 18%Claims 60%Positioning 22%

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Procedure · 10 wordsYes, Madam Speaker, let us not forget about the Snowbirds.Procedure Claims · 32 wordsWhen the Snowbirds were grounded, the Secretary of State for Rural Development said it was a very, very joyous and happy day.1 When the Snowbirds were cancelled, that is what he said.Partly on point Procedure · 13 wordsYes, let us take a look at some of the benefits to Saskatchewan.Procedure Claims · 43 wordsThe Secretary of State represents the part of our province that should benefit the most because there are a lot of great resources in the north that could be developed. The industrial carbon tax is going to hammer those projects in his riding, Positioning · 27 wordsso it is shameful that he continues to prop up that policy. He is clearly not on Saskatchewan’s side. Only Conservative members are truly on Saskatchewan’s side.PositioningPartly on point

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