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Gérard Deltell

157 words · 19 sentences · 20 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, my concern is that the Conservatives tend to want to jump up and proclaim that Canada is in a recession, such as they did on Friday. Even the Bank of Canada has cautioned the Conservatives and others. Saying Canada is in a recession is premature at best. The Conservatives know that, yet they seem to want to glorify the word in order to plant fear in the minds of Canadians. The member put many comments on the record just now. He talked about trade and the importance of trade. We have had 20-plus trade and defence-related agreements in the last year under this new Prime Minister, who was elected just one year ago. He talked about energy. This Prime Minister has talked about making Canada a super energy supplier going into the future. Take a look at the major projects. I wonder if the member would—”
Statement grade
F
34 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 10%Procedure 7%Positioning 41%Claims 41%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordsI always appreciate the comments by my colleague from Winnipeg North, even if they are wrong.Thanks Procedure · 3 wordsThe problem is, ProcedurePositioning · 4 wordswhere are the results?Positioning Claims · 52 wordsPeople are asking for real results.Partly on point I am sure the member remembers well the campaign promise by the leader of the Liberal Party 15 months ago.1 He said it would be elbows up and he told America we would be strong again.2 When he got elected, he went to the White House.3 Positioning · 20 wordsWhat did he do? It was far from elbows up. He was humble. What did he do a week ago?Positioning Claims · 5 wordsHe went to New York.4 Positioning · 4 wordsWhat did he say?Positioning Claims · 8 wordsHe said we will make America great again.5 Positioning · 4 wordsWho can believe it?PositioningOff point Procedure · 8 wordsThis is the truth.Unearned certainty This is the reality.ProcedureUnearned certainty Positioning · 33 wordsImagine if a Conservative had said that in New York. Those guys would have been in a nuclear war against us. The truth is that this country needs real effects and real results—PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty

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