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Mark Gerretsen

96 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Louis Villeneuve (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, does my colleague not find it surprising that the Conservatives describe Canada as a complete failure when millions of Canadians are working, investing, creating businesses and contributing every day to one of the strongest economies in the world?”
Statement grade
D
46 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Positioning 40%Claims 60%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 4 wordsit is absolutely correct.Positioning Claims · 58 wordsThe reality is that we live in a world right now that we could not have predicted two years ago.Unearned certainty We are responding to the uncertainties in that world and laying the framework and the groundwork to have a stronger economy that is not reliant on one particular trading partner but that can be diverse throughout the world.Vague promise Positioning · 34 wordsI have full confidence in the Prime Minister’s ability to do that.Partly on point I think it is glaringly obvious to Canadians that the alternative in the Leader of the Opposition just does not measure up.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty

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