Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Roman Baber

177 words · 17 sentences · 19 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 31%Claims 40%The ask 27%Promise 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordssometimes I think the Prime Minister is trolling us.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsWhat did he propose to protect the Jewish community? It was the Advisory Council on Rights, Equality, and Inclusion, with Omar Alghabra of all people.1 Positioning · 4 wordsIt is an insult.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsThat is the Prime Minister’s solution to synagogues being shot at and thugs harassing senior homes or marching in North York and chanting for intifada. Positioning · 15 wordsLiberals love advisory councils. It is grade school level. Why not take some real steps?Positioning The ask · 12 wordsThey could enforce the law, call the RCMP’s integrated security enforcement team.2 Claims · 6 wordsThis is a national security matter. The ask · 11 wordsThe Liberals need to deport the 700 IRGC agents from Canada.3 Claims · 6 wordsSo far, they have deported one.4 The ask · 17 wordsThey could listen to the Association for the Chiefs of Police and pass my bill, Bill C-257, 5Claims · 8 wordswhich would criminalize the wilful promotion of terrorism.6 The ask · 7 wordsWork with us and pass my bill. Positioning · 26 wordsTo the 400,000 Jewish Canadians, I am embarrassed by the Liberal government.7 The Conservative leader and all of my Conservative colleagues will not tolerate this nonsense.PositioningVague promise Promise · 6 wordsWe will always protect Canada’s Jews.Vague promise

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