“Mr. Speaker, the member can spin, deflect and dress up this issue however he likes, but why should Canadians believe that the Liberal government’s promises about the future are true, when the numbers today prove that the Liberals cannot manage the present? Canada is the only G7 country in a recession. The Prime Minister told Canadians that we have the best deal in the world with the U.S. Oil prices are surging. Canada should be thriving. Instead, our economy has contracted three out of the last four quarters. I will ask again, if the world is to blame, then why—”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 64. The grade is held to 63, 30 above Relevance.
63 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 12%Claims 25%Positioning 22%Promise 41%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 12 wordsI have a news flash for the leader and the party opposite.ProcedureClaims · 11 wordsWe are in a trade war.1We are facing economic headwinds.Positioning · 11 wordsCanadians do not want the political theatre that the leader loves.PositioningClaims · 13 wordsListen to the chief economist of Scotiabank, who characterized his behaviour as “irresponsible”.2Off pointPromise · 40 wordsOn this side of the House, we are going to build an economy for all Canadians.Vague promiseWe are going to invest in infrastructure, in defence and in housing, in major projects.We will build Canada strong, a Canada for everyone.Partly on pointVague promisePositioning · 10 wordsThe opposition leader is missing in action.Where is he?PositioningOff point