“Mr. Speaker, Canada is the only G7 country in a recession. Yesterday, my colleague on the other side responded by trying to convince us that their approach is working. She said, “It is working.” However, a tremendous number of people back home are telling me that they feel a lump in their throat when they get to the supermarket checkout, praying that the payment will go through, because they are not sure there is enough money in their account. How can she say it is working when a rich country like Canada is forced to rely on food banks to feed its people?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 69 wordsyes, it is working.It is working so well that, when I meet with people in my riding, they know that we are working hard to tackle the extremely difficult circumstances faced by my esteemed colleague’s constituents.Vague promiseThey know that the Canada groceries and essentials benefit is a decision we have made and that it is working for them.1It is a decision that the Conservatives did not support.2Positioning · 14 wordsWhen we support the economy through investment, the Conservatives are nowhere to be seen.PositioningClaims · 17 wordsThey vote against it.Our constituents know that our approach is serious and that it will work.