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Patty Hajdu

105 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Brad Vis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, in March, the government increased the temporary foreign worker program from 10% to 15% for thousands of work sites in remote and rural communities across Canada. At the same time, Canada lost 112,000 jobs in that same period of time and the youth unemployment rate was at 14.3%. Through my Order Paper question yesterday, we learned that the program for temporary foreign workers cost $1.6 billion with a net loss of $509 million. What will the government say to the hundreds of thousands of unemployed youth in this country when they are increasing the number of temporary foreign workers this year?”
Statement grade
A+
Average 98 / 100
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Claims 87%Reasoning 7%Positioning 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 38 wordsthat member’s numbers are quite incorrect. In fact, temporary foreign worker use has declined, 1so much so that the large corporations that many of his colleagues continue to advocate for are actually now focused entirely on Canadian talent. Reasoning · 7 wordsThat is the way it should be, Claims · 53 wordsand that is why we have taken these actions. It is much harder for employers to hire temporary foreign workers in regions with high unemployment rates and in regions where people are looking for work. In fact, this work is what we are doing despite the advocacy of many of that person’s colleagues. Positioning · 7 wordsMaybe they can get their messaging clearer.Positioning

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