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Jennifer McKelvie

67 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Gord Johns (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, ferries are essential highways for coastal communities. Of course we support strong federal funding for ferry services in Atlantic Canada. However, BC Ferries receives only $1.63 per passenger in federal operational support, compared to about $291 per passenger in Atlantic Canada. Temporary relief measures and repayable loans for B.C. cannot replace fair, long-term federal operational support. When will the Liberal government finally modernize these outdated agreements and provide fair support for British Columbia and BC Ferries?”
Statement grade
C
Average 62 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 15%Claims 21%Promise 49%Positioning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordswe thank the member for his advocacy for British Columbia.Thanks Claims · 14 wordsI am aware that the letter he sent to the department has been received.1 Promise · 26 wordsWe are looking forward to having conversations about how we can continue to invest in British Columbia and how we can continue to invest in Canada.Vague promise Positioning · 10 wordsWe were elected with a mandate to build Canada strong, PositioningPromise · 7 wordsand we will proceed with doing that.Partly on pointVague promise

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