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Kevin Lamoureux

137 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Greg McLean (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I have a question for the member on the other side. He gave a speech about what the opposition is doing right now. I am a little dismayed, because I think he needs to speak to what the motion is, which is about the recession that Canada is very clearly heading into now. There are a number of data points we have to give here, but the member has to identify, and probably has to own, quite frankly, some of the policies the government has pushed the country to that have led us to the economic point we are at right now. Would the member please address that as opposed to blaming others, either south of the border or on this side of the House, saying that we are the ones misspeaking on this? The data speaks for itself. The country is in economic decline. Can he tell us what he thinks he should change on the other side of the House in order to arrest that trend?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 50%Reasoning 16%Claims 8%Procedure 7%Promise 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 30 wordsI am more inclined to believe what the Bank of Canada is saying on the issue of the recession than I am to believe the leader of the Conservative Party.Positioning Reasoning · 22 wordsI think the GDP, yes, is a very important indicator, but there are also other important indicators that should be looked at. Positioning · 38 wordsAt best, the Conservatives are being premature by going around and shouting in glee that Canada is in a recession, when there are other indicators that show that Canada is building strong and that the economy will grow.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsIt is predicted to have the second-largest growth in the G7.1 Procedure · 9 wordsI think there are some solid figures out there, ProcedurePromise · 27 wordsand I look forward to ultimately being able to demonstrate very clearly in the coming months that we are, in fact, sticking to a strong build Canada.Vague promise

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