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Kevin Lamoureux

186 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Cathay Wagantall (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I have a question about the school food program. We have school food programs in Saskatchewan for kids who come to school hungry. I think it is really important. However, the government committed $216.6 million annually to the food program and is making it permanent. An additional 400,000 children will benefit from this commitment every year. There are 5.5 million students in school right now and 3.5 million are in elementary. With the money the government is giving, it works out to $2.70 per day per child. How is that caring for children? Why does the government not give the money back to the parents through a proper economy and let them feed their own kids?”
Statement grade
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Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 9%Claims 45%Thanks 11%Reasoning 19%Promise 8%Positioning 6%The ask 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsI was about to give a compliment after the member made reference to the Saskatchewan program.Procedure Claims · 30 wordsOne has to remember that this is not for all children in school. It is for the youngest of children.1 Provinces and stakeholders have been widely supportive of the program. Thanks · 20 wordsWhat I liked about her question was that she acknowledged it is a good program in the province of Saskatchewan.Thanks Claims · 53 wordsThat is what she implied.Partly on point I would suggest it is a good program for the 400,000-plus children nationwide.2 I have been a parliamentarian since 1988, 3and I can tell the member opposite that from virtually day one, I have heard about the issue of education and how important education is to our society.Partly on point Reasoning · 35 wordsPart of that is that a child cannot learn on an empty stomach, which is why it is so important for the government to have established a national program by demonstrating leadership on the issue. Promise · 14 wordsHopefully other provinces and so forth will be able to possibly grow the program, Positioning · 12 wordsbut at least we are making a very strong and positive statement.Positioning The ask · 6 wordsThe Conservatives should reverse their position.Partly on point

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